Matt's Critique #1
FEMALE POSTER:
-I would suggest maybe making "Every Woman..." and the "Only 8%..." lines of text maybe just a little bigger. The text on the bottom maybe a shade darker, and also the very bottom text (everyone is unique...) a shade darker as well.
-The details in the back almost are in the same shape as the signs that are like "do not do" (circle with the line through it)
I like the details and the thinness of them, but maybe change them up slightly.
-Besides that... I think they are great.
MALE POSTER:
Same thing as the female poster. Text to be a shade darker, and the lines in the back to be changed slightly.
Matt's Critique #2
Matt's Critique #2
I really like the small changes that you have made to your posters. I really could only think of thing that I would suggest:
Male poster: I noticed that the background texture lines go through some of the six pack cut outs. I know that they should actually show up, but to me it almost seemed to distract from the design ever so slightly.
That was my only suggestion really. I do like your lighter texture that you added in the background. Both look good. I don't know which one I would choose to be honest. Great job!
My Response
I did darken the bottom type ever so slightly, and I added a subtle element in the background that suggests more of the street warning street sign look. I decided to leave the type the same size though. I feel that the dominant icons and the orange type draw the viewer in far enough to read on.
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